Sunday, 28 December 2025

80. Catherin J Pascal Dunk's "forlorn", inviting Catia Castrucci with flowers

forlorn

forlorn, like those dead roses Coles
daren’t discount.

forlorn. the very word is like a bell.1
a wandering
between worlds.2



Photo by Catherin J Pascal Dunk 2025.


  1. The second stanza is cento-esque. This line is from John Keats' Ode to a Nightingale (1820, stanza 8):

    Forlorn! the very word is like a bell
             To toll me back from thee to my sole self!
    
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  2. I'm referring here to Matthew Arnold's Stanzas from the Grande Chartreuse (1855, lines 82/83):

    Wandering between two worlds, one dead
    one powerless to be born.

    Line 85 includes the word 'forlorn'.
     

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