Saturday, 27 September 2025

70. Julie Simpson's 'Zen Gardeners' - inviting Eve Gray up the garden path




                                                                        Zen gardeners  

 

Raked gardens imitate water 

a distant mountain looks

                                                                 like borrowed scenery

maple leaves flutter

                                                                  freshly raked gravel

ripples in a silent stream

as a patient Zen gardener

clears a path for insight

as a young monk meditates

 one brown sandal damming

  his river of stroked stones

 old monk ignores Gymea lilies

looking for straight answers

the full moon’s reflection

 symbol of Enlightenment

 shivers in the lily pond

 mimicking in miniature

  each praying man's

 imperfect

  focus.

 

 

 


 

Revised version of a poem previously published in The Perfect Diary.


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