Friday, 14 March 2025

44. Anna Kerdijk Nicholson's 'Mist' - inviting Di Sylvester into the garden

 


Mist

 

Its beauty burns away in the day

but last night it filled, overbanking

the valley and up to the window catch

like a wave over an ocean headland, below

only a monochrome Lloyd Rees over

everything known, no snow gum, too

erasing winter-wood stacks, all down-

covered, blanked, familiar boundaries’ absolute

reassurances lost and with them the courtesy

of belonging. Last night driving, who

trailed wraith tendrils across Thursday,

what put another realm there, dared it

to wrap the headlights in its touch,

car surging through the moment, sped up

as if through amnesia, to give eye

back its parameters and there! the thwack,

a night-bird’s wings angel-spread against

deep blue. At home’s glow, mist

is lost to dog bounce, baked apple, its ghostly

unreality reasserts noiselessly, wrapped about

the house, when lights-off night vision

reveals a moon riding high: its light belongs

on the mist, in the valley, it’s not culpable

for blotting out our containment, this

moment all is only mist, sky and moonlight,

the beginning of something very old, right now.

 


Written in response to Kit Kelen’s ‘Waiting for Alfred’ using the last word in each of his poem’s lines as the last word in each of this poem’s lines.

 


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