Monday, 10 February 2025

21. Jan Dean's 'Spindrift and Scotch Mist' - inviting Debbie Robson




Spindrift and Scotch Mist

inviting Debbie Robson

for my late friend, Gail Hennessy

 

You would love the venue with a view

of the splendid sweep of sand leading to Nobby’s/

Whibayganba with its cluster of houses and lighthouse

since you posted it on Facebook, so many times.

Your photos were often taken through arches of booths

with an Art Deco or Spanish mission flavour

in keeping with the surf club. There are differences:

You left suddenly, over a year ago

and your photos showed surf and sky of the brightest blue.

Today it’s bleak, a grey day: Sea and sky dissolve the horizon.

A woman shuffles up from the surf, with a large beach towel

wrapped around her head and body, while a few couples

move toward the car park. A lone fisherman wields

a fishing rod, and children skip, oblivious to the weather.

Was this your happy space, because it revived

the Cronulla surfie girl? You were passionate

about your garden with wildlife. Fanciful, I sometimes

imagined you would accept the power to transform

this stretch of beach with azaleas and camellias.

Better still, picture the magic of melaleucas, callistemon

grevillea, and banksia. From 2 to 4 pm today

it’s the first Hunter Writers’ social club and tomorrow

night, the tribute to you and your poetry. For now,

while some see spindrift, I feel scotch mist, descending.

 

‘Scotch Mist’ is a dense mist mixed with drizzle commonly found in the Scottish Highlands.

2 comments:

  1. A beautiful tribute to Gail, Jan. I miss her warmth, and her photos and poems, too

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  2. This poem has so much feeling, so much imagery ... my sister has just died, and I found these words beautiful

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